In my explosion project, what are the 3 main things I will remember the most? I will always remember my homemade explosions that I exploded, presenting, and how I felt after presenting. Why I picked these 3 times was because had the most fun doing them.
When I decided to make some homemade explosions, I knew that I had to be able to produce everything that I had promised. I first started on my volcano, I built it and made it explode. When I was assembling the volcano I wanted to do another explosion. I was unsure until I went to the store and thought about the Mentos and diet soda. After I had done the volcano outside I brought the diet coke and Mentos out side and put double the amount of Mentos in the soda and it went so hight!
This was the first time I was presenting one of my projects. So I was very scared that I was going to mess up of do the wrong thing. But when I was presenting, since I knew everyone, was not so scared anymore. I was very happy when I presenting and everyone seem happy with my work. I was very excited and proud of myself because I had talking in front of people.
When I had finished presenting and we all went up to rap up the presentation I felt so good about myself and my performance. Whenever I have talking in front of people about my work I get really scared and worried about how I was going to present myself in front of people. Sometimes I feel like an outsider when I present because everyone else in my middle school class are happy to present and I am not. But, now I am ready to present and proud to show my work!
Working on this project changed the way I graded myself on this essay. Once I thought about what are my main 3 things I remembered, all of my memories of my project came back and I was able to mush it all into 3 paragraphs. This was probably my favorite project so far. It was so much fun!!
I'm glad you enjoyed the project. Your writing is great and I noticed a couple of writing errors that I'm sure you would notice if you read your writing aloud slowly to yourself or someone else. Try it, and see what you find. I hope you get to build many other things this year for your projects.
ReplyDeleteAlyssa,
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that the way you felt after presenting was one of the things that you will never forget. I hope that you will remember that feeling as you get ready for future presentations. You Rock!
Amy